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FrozenSheep



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PostPosted: Fri May 20, 2011 6:01 am    Post subject: Webing those comics and stuff Reply with quote

http://cecebythesea.comxa.com/



I've decided to give webcomics a try. Check it out.
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Arc Tempest



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PostPosted: Fri May 20, 2011 6:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

No.
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Mikewee777



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PostPosted: Fri May 20, 2011 6:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Those are some nice lines you drew there.

I have seen some lines in my time and yours are better than the ones I see at the DMV.

You have potential. Keep it up. I believe in you.
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Halen



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PostPosted: Fri May 20, 2011 6:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Has someone told Kry about this thread? I feel it's important he's kept informed.
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Heretical Rants



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PostPosted: Fri May 20, 2011 6:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

haha, at least it's better than those people who haven't figured out that things look nicer if you use lines of varying width.

The comic itself is like the comical webcomickery dragonball of the sea. Take that to mean whatever you want to take it to mean.


Also, if you want to get good at drawing your characters, study anatomy as related to drawing a bit more. It really does help, even for characters that are highly abstracted. Maybe study some cartoon anatomy, too. I actually have more trouble drawing those bloody 3-fingered hands than I do with actual hands.



The image you started this thread with is nowhere near as good as this one: http://cecebythesea.comxa.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/05/Untitled-3-628x1024.jpg

What's up with that? Why would you give us a second-rate piece of your work to chew on as our first impression of it? Yeesh.

The main difference is that bendy arms really should only bend in certain ways, I think.
I don't care that your characters don't have elbows, but they will look a lot nicer if the arms are at least bent in ways that put them into somewhat realistic positions.


You could produce something of quality here. You just have to keep at it.
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Thy Brilliance



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PostPosted: Fri May 20, 2011 7:59 am    Post subject: Advertisement isn't taken kindly here. Reply with quote

If you are going to advertise your webcomic, do it in the "Forum Guidelines" subforum.
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Halen



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PostPosted: Fri May 20, 2011 9:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Also, don't.
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CTrees



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PostPosted: Fri May 20, 2011 11:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Eh, can't be worse than that raygun guy with the charlie brown thing.
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