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Feeling Gothic?
yes
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no, but I can fake it
46%
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I hate you so much, HamletSr
50%
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HamletSr



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PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 3:39 pm    Post subject: Sinfest GOTHIC Poetry Contest Reply with quote

Rules:

1. No Plagerizing
2. It has to be Goth, not Emo, err, sorry, emocore
3. It must take itself way to seriously

Entries will be judged in the court of public opinion after one week, oras soon as this thread dies, which may be very quickly, if my previous threads are any indication . . . . GO!
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Snorri



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PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 3:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That's way to easy.
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HamletSr



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PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 8:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dirge of the Banshee


I wear black because blood won't stain it,

I wear black to cover the long lines on my vein,

I wear black to cover my tracks,

I wear white on my face because the world is empty,

I wear black on my eyes to see you for what your really are,

I wear black boots so I can't feel your zombie skull cave in under them,

I wear black for me,

I wear black so you can't look through me,

Push me into a locker
Nail it shut
Bury me in the black ground

you can't look through me
you can't look through me
you can't look through me

AIIIIIIIIIIYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Go ahead and hate me, I don't care. Your whole family is made out of meat.


A Poem By HamletSr, in imitation of the goth kid style. I am voluntarily disqualified from winning though, because I plagerized T-Rex. Just trying to get the ball rolling. Comon guys, please? I WILL SUCK OUT ALL YOUR BLOOD
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HamletSr



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PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 8:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OK HERE IS ANOTHER HIGH QUALITY UNPLAGERIZED POEM ABOUT WEARING BLACK BY SOMEONE WHO WEARS BLACK ALL THE TIME


Well, you wonder why I always dress in black,
Why you never see bright colors on my back,
And why does my appearance seem to have a somber tone.
Well, there's a reason for the things that I have on.

I wear the black for the poor and the beaten down,
Livin' in the hopeless, hungry side of town,
I wear it for the prisoner who has long paid for his crime,
But is there because he's a victim of the times.

I wear the black for those who never read,
Or listened to the words that Jesus said,
About the road to happiness through love and charity,
Why, you'd think He's talking straight to you and me.

Well, we're doin' mighty fine, I do suppose,
In our streak of lightnin' cars and fancy clothes,
But just so we're reminded of the ones who are held back,
Up front there ought 'a be a Man In Black.

I wear it for the sick and lonely old,
For the reckless ones whose bad trip left them cold,
I wear the black in mournin' for the lives that could have been,
Each week we lose a hundred fine young men.

And, I wear it for the thousands who have died,
Believen' that the Lord was on their side,
I wear it for another hundred thousand who have died,
Believen' that we all were on their side.

Well, there's things that never will be right I know,
And things need changin' everywhere you go,
But 'til we start to make a move to make a few things right,
You'll never see me wear a suit of white.

Ah, I'd love to wear a rainbow every day,
And tell the world that everything's OK,
But I'll try to carry off a little darkness on my back,
'Till things are brighter, I'm the Man In Black.

JOHNNY CASH WAS A GOTH
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Dusty



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PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 8:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The night was dark light.
The air carried sickly fright.
woke to cut the throats.
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Michael



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PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 8:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ouch.
stop that.

you meanie!

in the Night
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AndieNicole



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PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 10:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Feeling kinda Emo

The Black Pain
Pressing in
Suffocating me
I cry
I bleed
Save me
But don't
mess up
my hair!
It took me
hours to
get it in
this
flippy-thing!
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Major Tom



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PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 10:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

JUDGED?

screw that, i'm too sad and important.
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nathan



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PostPosted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 2:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

My soul bleeds like a stuck pig.
You will never see your own hands which are red as wet red blood,
because they are covered in my blood, which I bled. On you.
Can you taste the stench? Are you sickened by it?
Yes. My soul is like that. If my soul were cheese, it would be limburger.

Why did you refuse my limburger love?

My love, you snickered at me because I wore black that was as dark as a black night,
but you didn't see my shattered soul, and how my pain and solitudeness was so
much darker than those black painted tears, that they were not black, but white in comparison to the darkness
of my love. For you.

Those black tears drowned me.

Can you touch, now that I am gone, my soft cheeks which are whiter than $4.97 Face Powder #3 from Rite-Aid?
Or are they too white for your soulless soul?
My memory will haunt you like a ghost in the night.
I will become a ghost of rejection: you will forever haunt me.
And what of those long hours we two spent spending time beside the cemetary plots plotting our own beautiful ends
together, rejoicing in the sweet agony of a death that approaches like a stranger that is coming toward you?

By the time you read this crumpled note covered in the tears
of two sleepless nights in a row,
I'll be a hellbound ship with you in tow,
or a lost dog in the last pen at the pound, awaiting the needle with nowhere to go.

Yes, my dear, our sweet black love has curdled.
I am now hurdling myself over the ledge of sixteen aspirin:
one for each year you were blind to my suffering, which has been eternal
every day of my life. I will now fly away, your tragic dove
fallen from the sky so high above.

Why did you refuse my limburger love?
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casinopete



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PostPosted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 3:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

what have you wrought?
a miasma of agony as affections twist.
once we savored heaven,
wide-eyed and untainted,
but your heart perished.
a feverish throng of memory -
tears follow bitterness, follow bitterness,
love dissolved.
in a torrent of tears,
i condemn you.
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Usagi Miyamoto



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PostPosted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 10:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

said a
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Amethyst Shadow



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PostPosted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 11:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I find it amusing that the ad above this thread is for Vampire Fangs. Laughing
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 11:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i bleed.....
so that
my shadow is nourished
we all
are flies
spewing vomit on the trashcan that is life.

deathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeathdeath
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Michael



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PostPosted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 2:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fuck you, I won't do what you tell me
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Motherfucker!
Uggh!
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DarkSouled



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PostPosted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 2:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

you are all so totally emo :p
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