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Holocauxt
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I just found out what's been bothering me about Panel 1:
Fuchsia looks like a Peanuts character.
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Mr. Chicken
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| Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2012 2:48 am Post subject: |
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heh thanks holocauxt you made me laugh more than you would expect.
the last panel is almost painfull to see. her face, the position of her arms, even her tail, everything in fuchsia shows a fragile, damaged creature, that tries to stand the pain inside of her. i havent seen anything so sad in a big time and im sad that it had to be her.
I dont think monique or even Crim can do anything to help her. But for some weird reason i cant really explain i think a little encounter with blue might just do the trick. In past times when fuchsia needed to make a big desition or when she doubted her own identity Blue ussually said something that made Fuchsia regain her confidence and move on.
Or maybe im talking nonsense, today i had an accident and i hit my head reaally hard.
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Demetirus
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| Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2012 1:09 pm Post subject: |
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| Aww, I hope Crim can help support Fyoosh and be there for her on this one. If we're lucky we'll get to see them both open up and share and fully support one another, but right now it looks like Fyoosh is more in need. Poor thing. |
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mouse
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| Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2012 6:44 pm Post subject: |
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| Adyon wrote: |
You know, you're right. I completely over-looked it. And believe me, sometimes artists do it un-intentionally. You're trying to put that emotion in the character, and it just looks more natural for them there. |
he's done it really nicely - look at panel 4. her knees are up higher than his (so she's still got the longer legs), and although the top of their heads are level, he is sitting up straight and she is all hunched over.
so if you look the difference in heights is preserved - but as has been said, she's huddled down into herself.
really nice job.
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Yinello
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| Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2012 9:22 am Post subject: |
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It's very nice and I think this could lead up to some pretty good character delving. She'll reach back into her past and build herself up again.
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| Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2012 5:48 am Post subject: |
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| If Tat ever gets back to this story. |
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